Learning A Ranked Ability: Poisoned Chakra

Satune laied there on the ground for what seemed to be an eternity. After what felt like hours to Satune, he thought 'ok he is probably not gonna come back,' so Satune got off the ground, still ready to substitute if his Sensai ever reapered. Satune walked around the forest, looking for his Sensai, listening to every sound that passed by, Satune held his sword up in case he got attacked from the front. Satune saw a stupm that he could sit on to rest after a while of looking for his Sensai. Satune sat on the stump, and shut his eyes for a while, he also made sure that if his Sensai did attack, he would substitute with a nearby stump.

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The log was firm and supported Satune, (duh.) His sensei neer apeared, but blood continued to drip from Satune's open wound. This survival training was the toughest anyone would get.

('His sensei neer apeared??? what do you mean?)

Satune who had been looking for his Sensai so much forgot the wound that his Sensai gave him earlier. Satune quickly filler up the wound with black Chakra, just to stop the bleeding for now. Satune wondered if his Sensai would come back so he could fight, it wasn't much training if his Sensai was not there. To spend the time, Satune got up off the stump, and started releasing Chakra through his hands, always making sure that he would substitute if his Sensai did a surprise attack. When enough black Chakra came out of Satune's hands, he started to mold it to make an exact replica of him self. Of course, the replica was completely black, and had no major features. But Satune kept making his Chakra replica better and more detailed, until after some time, the Chakra replica looked close enough to him self, but it was still black.

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[sensei never appeared, sorry.]

The mossy black chakra felt uncomfertable in Satune's wound. Countinue about your injurie and try getting out.

It seemed like Satune had barely got into the forest, but when he looked around him self, all he saw was dark thick forest. The trees were so close together that he could not see far away. He thought that his Sensai was probably enjoying him self at the village, and was somehow seeing Satune in a way, to see if Satune was doing anything suspicious. Satune needed to get out of the forest and find his Sensai, the only problem was that Satune had no idea from which way he came from. Satune made his Chakra look a like disapear, and again there was a weird black smoke from when his Chakra disappeared, the smoke seemed to just sit there in the air, doing nothing, when Satune walked through he did now feel anything at all. After 5 minutes of looking at the smoke, Satune started looking for footsteps on the ground. Every time Satune leaned over to look at a foot like shape on the ground, his wound stinged strongly. After a while of looking, Satune found one of what looked like his foot steps, there was a little trail of blood, that Satune could barely see in the darkness of the trees. Satune walked beside the little trail of blood, listening for any sounds of someone around he might be able to ask for directions. Satune walked for what was a short time, and found where he got stabbed in the first place, 'the village can`t be to far away' Satune thought, as he again started looking for traces.

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The blood had begun passing to the sides of the black chakra that held it. Satune felt his eyes grow heavy as he walked.

(Done Training... I guess)

[Since Satune had previously been training this before the new rules where set in place, to learn this ability, he only needs 10 points. And his word count surpased the new system by a lot.]