Learning A Ranked Ability: Poisoned Chakra

Satune woke up early in the morning, to excited to keep sleeping, today was the day that he was going to learn how to poison his Chakra. Satune sprung out of bed, grabbed his sword and gloves and ran out the door. Satune was so excited that he didn't feel any discomfort from the previous days of training. Satune had planned out what he was going to do, but first he needed to see the Mizukage and ask him if there was anyone that specialized in poisons. It was a bright and sunny morning, Satune rushed his was to the building the Mizukage was in. When Satune arrived at the Mizukage's door, he knocked and waited for a response.

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The sound resonated around the room, but the door didn't open. A small amount of time passed and then there was a voice behind him.

"What are you doin' here? I'm right here!"

The voice was raspy and cold, as if a faint tint of insanity was concealed behind the high-pitched mask of sound. When he pronounced his N's he lowered his voice dramaticaly.

(Is this voice behind me? tell me, and if i made my post wrong, ill change it.)

Confused by this awkward voice, Satune waited a bit longer, thinking on what this man with the weird voice was talking about, it didn't make sense. 'Was this man talking to the Mizukage or to no one' Satune asked him self. After a while with no response, Satune knocked on the door again, but this time he his a lot harder, it was more of a punch than a knock. After this hard knock, Satune waited yet again out side of the door for a response, hoping some one would answer the door, or Satune would just have to find another place to find some one that could help him.

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Then the cold voice rasped again as he begun a steady laugh of insanity. Above Satune, and now it was obvious, there was a man standing on top of the roof. He laughed more then spun in a circle and jumped down.

"What brings you here, child." Asked the man, who was now clearly Satune's sensei; he seemed to have changed, his voice and how he acted had changed from some sort of insane clown to a silent, and stiff, ninja.

Satune looked up, not surprised, Satune expected his Sensai to be hanging upside down some where, laughing crazily. "O, hello Sensai," said Satune, "I was just going to see the Mizukage, and ask him if he knew the location of some one that is an expert in poisons," Satune went on, "How is searching for this clan your looking for? I could help you locate them when i'm done learning how to poison my Chakra."

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"Hmph, your a cursive kid." He said, as he crossed his arms.

He spoke, "I didn't find anything new out."

He raised his head towards the sky, then he turnd around and waved his arms to follow.

Seeing the signs that Satune should follow his Sensai, Satune didn't know what to do. He had come here to talk to the Mizukage, which he still hadn't, now he was being told to leave. Satune suspected that the Mizukage was probably wasn't there any ways, and Satune didn't want to enrage his Sensai. So seeing no other options, Satune followed his Sensai, hoping he would lead Satune to some where useful. Satune thought perhaps that his Sensai was a expert in poisons, he still didn't know what his Sensai was really good at. Satune wondered where his Sensai would bring him.

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After a few minutes of walking, his sensei turnd around and sat down with both eyes closed. As if he had acheived perfect harmony within himself.

Satune was impatient with his Sensai, since he really wanted to learn this ability as soon as he could. Satune tried to hide the impatience in his voice and asked, "where are you taking me?" After Satune had asked his question, Satune sat beside his Sensai, and looked at what ever was in front of Satune. Bored Satune started making 2 guys fighting in his palm, using his black Chakra, the fight resembled how Satune had fought when he was killing people to become a Genin. The little person made of Chakra that resembled like Satune had the upper hand, he tripped his opponent, grabbed a close by rock and cracked his opponents head with it, he was obviously dead, the Chakra Satune ran away, to the real Satune's fingers, where it found another opponent. while Satune watched him self fight, he thought of how weak he was back then, and how much stronger he was now, and how much stronger he will become in the near future. Satune had no intention of watching him self fight back then, he was weak. When the Chakra Satune got back to the center of his hand, the real Satune crushed it by making a fist with that hand.

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"Wait" is all his sensei told him as he meditated.

His eyes remaind closed as he hummed a gentel sound, a peace making sound. That nulled out every other sound.

Knowing that Satune was gonna be here for a while, he closed his eyes and concentrated on nothing but the melody that his Sensai was humming, also to listen to him self and his Sensai breathing. Satune heard nothing but these things. 5 minutes felt like a life time to Satune when he was in this state, then again, Satune wouldn't be able to tell if 5 minutes had passed or 1 hour. After a time that Satune couldn't count, he opened his eyes, and sat there like before, waiting for his Sensai to do something.

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He felt his sensei put something on his back. Then noticed Satune had opend his eyes and rushed to close them.

"Keep your eyes closed, meditate." He made the humming noise and then that was all Satune heard.

So yet again, Satune closed his eyes, and concentrated on the humming coming from his Sensai. After a while of meditating, Satune did not realize the thing that his Sensai put on his back, he also did not care about it. if doing was some how gonna help Satune in his training, he would do it all day, but now he felt uncomfortable, cause he did not know why he was here doing this. But Satune guessed that it had some kind of purpose, his Sensai was supposed to help him get stronger, and Satune could trust his Sensai to do that.

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"Stand." His sensei suddenly ordered him, the sun had gone down.

"Your chakra type, decide it."

He pointed to Satune's back then revealed a needle he carried in his hands.

"Your chakra type is important for this. You need the ultra rare poisiond chakra to accept the gift of poison."

He presented to Satune a tag. There were symboles on it that spelt in Kanji 'CHAKRA'

The way this tag reacts differentes your chakra.

[If you accept this chakra then PM me. If not then tell me. If you decline, you can't get this ability, and the words you put will be diverted to something else.]

Satune was still meditating when his Sensai told him to stand. It took a while before Satune got around to doing it, but by time that happened, his Sensai was talking away. Satune got up, he half heard what his Sensai said, but with what he heard, it made enough sense. Satune had done everything he had planned to get this ability, he was not gonna give it up now. Satune started focusing as much Chakra as he could into this tag on his back. Satune hoped that some thing would happen to make his Chakra a poison type, if it was another type, he couldn't get this ability, so all that Satune could do for now was focus Chakra into that tag and hope for the best.

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The tag exploded into a small cloud of purple gas.

"Excelent! Now take cover." He hid behind a rock until the smoke cleared then he smiled.

Satune turned around, and heard his Sensai say those words at the same that he realized that smoke had come from the small tag on his back. Instantly, Satune put his hand over his mouth and did a slow run towards the nearest tree. Satune was happy to know that his Chakra type was poison, now finally he could learn this ability he had been preparing for. When the smoke had cleared, Satune walked away from the tree and towards his Sensai, asking "So what do I do now?" Satune then waited for his Sensai's response.

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His sensei patted his head and nodded.

"Now that you have poisonus chakra, we may begin your training."

He jumped back and took out his large sword.

"Draw!"

Satune looked at his Sensai with a small grin on his face while he was being patted on the head, since he could finally learn his poison ability, Satune felt like he was going to explode from excitement, but Satune tried to retain it. Satune heard his Sensai, he took a few steps back, and slowly drew his sword, remembering all the killing he had done with it. Satune got down into a position that he was ready to attack or defend, looking at his Sensai's big sword. Satune then waited for his Sensai's next commands.

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But his sensei didn't command, instead he slashed his sword out, viciously hitting Satune's, then leaving a blue echo of chakra to strike it again, leaving a shack in Satune.

[Modded battle or RolePlayed battle?]

(role play battle.)

Satune jumped back even more after his Sensai, and let the tip of his sword hit the ground. Satune was surprised that he hadn't said any thing. Satune made black Chkara fill the gash his Sensai made in him, to stop the bleeding. Satune then wondered what was the move his Sensai used on him, it was like Satune got slashed twice, the second time it seemed more like Chakra then a sword. Satune quickly thought of a plan, Satune made a giant plate like thing out of Black Chakra, and put so much Chakra into it that his Sensai probably couldn't see through it. When Satune was done making the plate, he pushed it forward towards his Sensai, while doing hand seals and picking up his sword after the hand seals, making sure he dragged his sword on the ground, making it seem like Satune was running right behind the plate and intending on attacking his Sensai. But this was not Satune's plan, he intended to wait till his Sensai slashed at the plate when it got close enough, then Satune would use Body Flicker to transport him self behind his Sensai and slash him form the back side. Hopefully his plan would go smoothly.

I want +2 movement and +3 damage bonus.
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[It's a roleplay battle, theres no bonuses.]

His sensei ignored the plate and formed a hand seal. Then he cleaved the plate in half. Satune appeared behind him but the poor innocent careless man didn't have time to react, the blade came and cut him in half. Or it cut a poor innocent careless peice of wood in half.

More hand seals were formed from his hidding spot.

It just didn't make sense why his Sensai was attacking him, has he gone crazy, or was he just testing, only time can tell Satune. Satune thought that his Sensai was testing him, to see if he was good enough to learn this ability, Satune was going to show him that he was ready. Satune made a circular shield around him, in case of any attacks, the shield would probably be like paper if his Sensai sliced at it, but Satune didn't care. Satune lifted an arm and a knee, after he did some hand seals. Mist appeared on the battle field, now Satune had the element of surprise. When the mist thickened, Satune put his sword up in a ready position, listening for any movement from his Sensai to find his location.

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Satune heard a crack of a twig then his shield was cleaved in half.

He swung his sword around in a circle and then punched the ground.

"There..." He pulled a kunai out and threws it at Satune, but his calculations were wrong and it would miss.

Satune found the location of his Sensai's hiding spot, but his Sensai had attacked him. Seeing the kunai flying towards Satune, he rolled to the left and pulled out a kunai of his own. when Satune finished his roll, he threw the kunai back towards his Sensai, hoping that it would hit him, but in case it didn't, Satune ran at him, holding his sword in front of himself, preparing to attack his Sensai.

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