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Shiken Kan

Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyWed Oct 10, 2007 10:19 pm

“Primary functional project successful, common… let’s see.” These where the first words Shiken heard besides the incessant droning sound of the machine in his ears. Then, the green water around him began to drain, was Shiken being freed, the things around his ears came away when the water was completely drained. The glass wall around him in a tube was pulled above and away, and the plugs placed all around his body where removed. A face mask of a plastic metal was taken off and Shiken Kan inflated his lungs with a gasp of air. He was sitting on the side of a piece of metal shaped somewhat like a rock that was made to carry the glass container. Shiken Kan was naked, but didn’t know all of the things that he should have, he didn’t even know how to read or write, and talking would not come naturally. Shiken Kan raised his head and looked up at the person in a large white lab coat, he raised the glasses from his eyes and took a closer look at Shiken Kan.
“Your name is Shiken Kan.” He kneeled in front of the new child, already created at an older age. He pointed his fingers at himself. “Do.” He smiled and pointed at Shiken. “You Shiken Kan.” He shook his fingers to make sure Shiken was looking at them, “Shiken.” The boy looked down at his naked chest then back at the person. “You, Do.” He pointed his finger at his chest. “Me, Shiken Kan.” The man jumped up in surprise. “Yes!”

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Lower Training Points by 25
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Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 97

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyWed Oct 10, 2007 10:21 pm

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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySun Oct 21, 2007 5:36 pm

75 Jutsu Points and 750 words.

Water Tube
100 Chakra per Burst
5% Increments of drowning opponent
50 Chakra to Maintain
Must keep absolute control, the slightest prick will dispel jutsu

Shiken Kan lifted his arm in front of his face; he was created at the age of eight, and by the age of fourteen he had almost mastered the spoken language. He lifted his hand in front of his face and winced. The doctors beside him where ready to let him roam with the other teens. The gate opened and Shiken looked at it, he was developed enough to know that this meant he was free, and he was intelligent enough to know that he should be excited, and he was. Shiken walked towards the gate that was opened to him. He walked out and felt sand under his boots, the large robes they placed over his head blocked out the sun, and the cap they gave him covered his eyes from the glaring rays. As soon as he had left he instantly begun walking around Sunagakure, the village hidden in Sand. Some teens came to him, one of them took out a kunai that was given to him and pointed it at Shiken Kan. The other two also brandished weapons the first a stick, the other a metal pipe. Shiken Kan bowed politely and smiled. “Hello, my name is Shiken Kan.” The three teens laughed and the one with a stick came to him.

“Look, Kan, where not joking around here, give us all you have on you and we don’t have to fight.” Shiken seemed unaware of what was going on, he looked at his clothing then back the bully. “No, my father gave me this cloak, it’s… hum… allot to me.”

Now the three laughed again the one with the stick spoke through his laugh, “that’s the idea!” The three laughed for a bit longer then the one with the stick stopped laughing, followed by the two others. He spun around and hit Shiken Kan in the legs with the wooden weapon. Shiken winced and fell to the ground. He began to stand up but the one with the pipe came and struck him savagely on the head. Then he remembered a lesson his father had told him. “Don’t let other kids pick on you, if someone is hurting you or your friends, hurt them back, its called self-defense.” Shiken Kan’s eyes glowed purple for a second as a jutsu flashed into his head, this was the fourth tie it had happened, the first three where for clone, transformation and substitution.

A short list of hand seals where formed and one of the kids put his hands around his throat as if he was drowning, the other two looked at him then Back at Shiken in his own bubble of concentration.

What the kid with the pipe saw was he was trapped within a tube, the tube had filled wit water and he had begun to drown. His air circuits where cut off and the boy tossed his head back, it was getting harder and harder not to breath it all in and die. The two other teens looked at each other unsure and went and touched their choking friend, he was expelled from the Genjutsu and coughed for every breath of air, then he turned and ran, the other two followed. “Its called self-defense!” Shiken Kan shouted towards them as he gathered himself and puffed his chest with a breath of air before continuing his walk around the city.

Shiken Kan was walking by a fruit stand, then his stomach rumbled and a buzzing noise hummed inside of his ears. His uncle told him that it was because he was hungry. Shiken Kan walked towards the fruit stand and bowed deeply with politeness. The owner, an old lady dressed in brown rags, smiled widely. She reached a hand and brought a pear to face level with herself. “You are so polite, it is hard to find hat anymore, I will give you this pear for only 25 cents.” Shiken smiled, he had only just begun learning math, only addition and subtraction. He smiled widely like the old lady and fished his hand into his pocket, he took out some coins and pushed them around in his right hand. The old lady noticed the tattoo and winced at it to read it from upside-down. “Creation” Then Shiken Kan presented her with the money and the pear was handed to him. He smiled and walked away. Taking a large bite of the pear, satisfying, however slightly, his hunger.

Shiken Kan sat on a bench and some girl was beside him. She looked at him and then at the pear, hunger in her eyes. Shiken looked at her as well then followed his sight to the pear. He smiled slightly, even knowing he was giving up his food, his father told him to always be polite to nice people. He gave the girl the fruit and she ate it with great pleasure.

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Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 97

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySun Oct 21, 2007 5:43 pm

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Number of posts : 65
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Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyFri Nov 09, 2007 2:58 pm

Shiken watched her eat the fruit with a slight disgust at how strangely she ate the pear. It was dripping from her mouth as if it was the greatest thing in this world. Shiken Kan blinked in surprise. Shiken Kan didn’t actually have a father, or any relatives for that matter, he simply had no related blood. The chief scientest in charge of the operation was old enough to be his grandfather, which is who Shiken Kan called his father. His uncles and aunts where all of the people who helped with the project. Even though Shiken Kan watched the girl eat the pear, and it was somewhat disgusting, there was a hint of beauty in it all. Shiken Kan winced as if to concentrate better, then when she finished she used whatever she had left of a sleeve to wipe her face. Then she looked surprised as she noticed Shiken starring at her. She blushed then spoke, “Thank you, mister.” Shiken Kan had only begun to learn about emotion, but his father had been to eager to see how he acted in the real world that he had rushed him to Sunagakure, with only the intellect of a second grade student. He nodded, this feeling, made his artificial heart beat quicker. He felt water secret from the top of his forehead. No, this wasn’t right… He looked up to find that it had begun to rain. The girl looked up as well then opened her mouth in shook. She looked down at Shiken. “You poor?” Shiken thought about the question, he put his hand in his pocket and the money shook within it. She opened her eyes in shook. “My dad said he gave me 20 dollars.” She opened her mouth wide in shook then smiled evilly.
“Come on!”
Her hand pulled Shiken Kan; his heart began pounding faster as she clasped his hand. She pulled him, the two began to run. Then she went over to a big vat of water. She looked down, it was filling to the brim! About half way there, and if this continued then it would be full in no time. What the two where starring down was a massive well type thing. It was always empty because this was the land hidden in sand. It is extremely rare for it to rain in Sunagakure. The girl looked at Shiken. “What’s your name?” The vat would fill up when it rained, then they would take it from the well and split it between houses equally, and this is when homeless people took advantage of it. Sadly they where all to scared to go into it. It could stop raining and they would drown, so they wait for it to reach the peak. “Shiken Kan.” He said between heart beating breaths.

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyFri Nov 09, 2007 3:00 pm

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Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Nov 10, 2007 12:30 pm

The girl nodded. “My name is Tsuuji.” She looked down the ever rising water level of the well, and she smiled, only a minute and she could reach it! She thought. Then the rain cleared and she looked up as the water level was still too low. By this time all of the homeless Sunagakuriens where leaving the well, disappointed, they wouldn’t get first dibs. Tsuuji looked up towards the sky and cried. “Why, Your so mean!!! WHY!!!” Then she slouched against the well and began to cry. Shiken turned his head towards the well, it wasn’t too deep. Shiken jumped down the well. Tsuuji stood up in shook and looked down at the foolish ninja. “What are you doing!” She cried after him as he landed into the water with a big splash.

Meanwhile…

“What the hell is he doing!” The lead scientist cried as he turned around. “Shiken doesn’t know how to swim!” He looked around at all of the terrified eyes in the room. “We can’t just let him die!” But, a relaxed and serious, scientist stood up from his chair. He pushed his glasses off of his nose and stared down the leader of the project. “We are going to just have to, we can make another, are resources are not thin.” The lead took a pen off of his desk and threw it in disgust at the serious one. The projectile landed meters away and the calm scientist simply walked out of the room, feeling repulsed. The rest of them stood up and apologized before leaving the room, unwanted. The chief turned around and sat in his chair exasperated. He was at a loss of air. Shiken Kan had been his life, just making a second Shiken Kan wouldn’t be the same. “NO!” He wouldn’t allow Shiken to drown, he told himself. In seconds he was working on a jutsu that would save Shiken’s life. But it takes at least a week or two to develop a new one, but he tried.

Shiken Kan struggled with the bucket in his hands, he writhed uselessly in the water “What… is going on!” Shiken’s father had told him that he needed to drink water, and to buy water bottles. But he never told him about their being enough water in it to hide him! He struggled, then his eyes glowed purple for a second as single hand seals with instructions came to him. He formed it and did exactly in the image. Then he felt he wasn’t struggling. Whether this was from the fact he had left the water or was calmer, he didn’t know. The girl above him had begun to scream kick! But she had stopped when this had happened.

The leader lifted his arms in congratulations to himself and Shiken Kan’s ability to learn things rapidly. Shiken was standing on water, it passed under him and changed everlastingly but he could feel himself able to control it. He looked up at the amazed girl above him. Her mouth was gapping open.

Word Count: 507

Learn Water Walking, D ranked jutsu. [D ranked requires 400 words]
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Nov 10, 2007 12:52 pm

He filled the bucket in his hands with water and he jumped out of the well, his large cloak waving in the wind, Shiken had never looked this heroic, and him and the scientist knew it. He lands next to the girl and tended her the bucket. She took it and smiled widely, well more like a half smile widely, she was still shocked. “Your… you’re a ninja.” Shiken winced at that, his father told him he was a human. “What’s a ninja.” He asked. The girl looked more shocked then when she saw him walk on water. But she decided to be polite instead of screaming at him, considering he got her water. “A ninja is a person who can do really cool things, I suppose. They usually take missions from the Kazekage.” Shiken got confused again. “Who’s the Kazekage.” She looked away, “they don’t want to tell us, but I’m sure that we don’t have a Kazekage right now, only the ninjas know, and they won’t tell, in fact only the Chunin know.” Now Shiken was absolutely confounded, he opened his left eye wider in question. It was similar to raising your eyebrow, except Shiken didn’t have any. She sighed, “do you know anything.” Shiken shrugged, “I know how to count.” She sighed louder.

Meanwhile…

The lead scientist walked into the room with all of the scientists eating in the cafeteria. “Your all fired.” They all looked at each other strangely. Food dropped from some of theirs mouths and others let theirs trays fall to the ground. The calm one from before said, “you will need us to build another Shiken Kan, don’t let his death cloud your proper judgment. “Shiken is not dead, I saved him, you’re all fired.” He turned around and entered the room from with the master computer.

Shiken Kan walked beside the young girl, Tsuuji, while she brought him towards a strange abandon building. Shiken Kan was only programmed with so many emotions, and the team of scientists, now only the captain, where working on either a new jutsu or a new emotion or just making him better from a distance. She brought him to an old door and knocked on it. A cracked voice coughed then spoke. “What’s the password?” It asked, he sounded even less educated then Shiken. Of course Shiken Kan spoke fine. She looked at Shiken. “I have a guest…” The voice on the other side coughed once. “…He is the best…” He coughed twice. “…I have a guest.” Then the man on the other side opened the door. “So, even tough he’s your first guest you still remembered the password.” Tsuuji smiled widely. “I know! I’m so clever.” He smiled and patted her head, “that’s a good girl.” She walked over to a desk, then looked at Shiken who still hadn’t entered the building. “Come in, you.” The man said as he grabbed Shiken and tossed him into the building. Then he looked at his hand in disgust, then rubbed it against his clothing. “Your friends soaking wet, get him out of that cloths or he’ll catch a cold. She nodded and grabbed Shiken’s hand to bring him into another room, this appeared to be some sort of public washroom. What kind of abandoned house was this? She looked at Shiken and sized him up. Tsuuji then said. “Alright, I’m going to get a new pair of cloths for you, you get out of that clothing in there.” She pointed at a washroom stall.

Word Count: 586
Train Chakra: 19
Wearing 4 Weights for -20 Words.
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Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Nov 10, 2007 2:12 pm

Tsuuji left the room in a rush to find some clothing that suits Shiken Kan, and during that time Shiken Kan goes into the stall withought being advised from his father by telecommunications. He wants to see how Shiken manages on his own. The artificial boy enters the stall land removes his large cloak. He then takes off his thick shirt, everything felt the same, it wasn’t colder like he excepted. He sighed with relief, and at that moment a small hand came under the doorway into the stall. He looked down at it, and saw what it carried. A pair of pants, similar to what the man at the door had been wearing, only smaller. Then he heard Tsuuji’s voice, “I’m sorry for not being able to find a shirt, there where none your size. Shiken nodded, not that she could see, he took the pants from her hands and pulled them over his legs. He tied the little knot at the waist, theirs a technique that he and his father where both proud of, he learnt that withought the weird imagery thing. He came out of the stall not wearing a shirt, he had very small arms and legs, also a small neck at shoulders. The only thing that really stuck out, is how they where shaped. Very firm, however small they’re as a definite endurance in his body. And the fact that he had a six pack didn’t lie. Imagine a small boy with hardly any muscles whom has a massive six pack.

She looked at his tiny body, maybe he wasn’t a ninja… She shrugged. After taking Shiken Kan’s wet clothing she hung it up outside, and then Shiken realized something. He didn’t bring up the fact that his father gave him that cloak, he felt disgraceful towards him. “Don’t be.” A familiar voice rang in his head as the communications line was brought up, but then he lost contact. “Come on, follow me, let’s go meet my friends.” She smiled widely, she could pass him off as he boyfriend and finally get rid of that annoying boy. She brought him, he couldn’t much refuse, she was stronger, and the scientist in the lab realized this as well.

Within moments they where in a large room, filled with sleeping homeless people, there was a few people tending to them, but Tsuuji didn’t slow down. They kept running for a bit, at least he could keep up with her. Quickly they reached a small playground with several homeless children, and a boy who only seemed slightly older then Shiken, his father told him he was 14 and he looked it. And Tsuuji seemed only 13, or maybe 14. The boy smiled when she came, he didn’t look homeless, but it looked like he was volunteering to play games with them. When Tsuuji came close to him he looked at Shiken with winced eyes. Then smiled and looked back at Tsuuji. “Hya, Tsuuji.” He said as he came from the “Simon Says” pedestal and chose one of the kids to take his place. Tsuuji began to back up and away from the group. Shiken followed, and then the boy as well. “Who’s this? Another homeless person you found on the streets? Is he an orphan? Is that why you’re holding his hand, you’re too generous.” Shiken opened his eyes wide and looked at his hand, he was indeed holding Tsuuji’s hand, a red hue came above his nose as his heart began quickly pounding.

Word Count: 586! [OMG!]

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Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Nov 10, 2007 4:48 pm

-19 tp
+19 ganjutsu

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Name: Shiken Kan
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Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Dec 01, 2007 5:47 pm

Shiken Kan’s heart was pounding quicker, his hand shook slightly as he tried to shake loose withought her noticing, but Tsuuji only tightened her grip he twitched once in his face and looked towards the older boy. The scientist sitting in his chair in his office lay back and munched down on some popcorn, this was going to get interesting… Tsuuji was the first to speak.
“I like him better then you.” The scientist in the white lab coat realized that she was going to use Shiken Kan to get this older boy off her back, he needed some hot puffs! He scurried down the hall as quickly as he could. The older kid winced and raised his fist and struck Shiken in the face when no one was watching but the three. Shiken fell to the ground, his nose was bleeding, a very human feature that the scientists made sure to put. Shiken lay on the ground, heart throbbing, blood coming out quicker then normal, blood was rushing too quickly. Shiken’s father realized this and pushed the “Cool Button.” A button with a direct connection to Shiken’s heart. The blood stopped coming out as fast, and his heart didn’t beat as quickly, giving him some time to think. But not long enough, he was pulled to his feet. Tsuuji was stepping back, afraid of getting in the crossfire, and what pain Shiken was going through, the older boy was strong. Shiken took a fist to the gut, then his head was pulled back and another strike in the face sent him back a few feet. Shiken stood up and looked at the older boy who was almost laughing.
“You would leave me, for him?” He laughed at Tsuuji, Shiken jumped towards him and struck the older boy in the head with his leg. Sending him a whole 10 feet back. The kid got up, he was bleeding from his mouth, he swiped some blood from his face with his hand and looked at it. Tsuuji took her eyes off of the older boy and looked at Shiken Kan. The young boy had grown muscles in an instant. The scientist thought maybe some of the quick development was there, but just lied dormant in him when they did the tests. Shiken Kan was built like a Chuunin now, a newly elected Chuunin. The boy stood up and Shiken delivered three quick jabs in the boys gut, then a powerful uppercut sending the boy 5 feet into the air and who performed a back flip involuntarily before crashing into the ground.
“Who the hell are you?” The boy asked as he ran away and turned his head to speak to Shiken. Then, before getting an answer, he disappeared behind some buildings. Tsuuji jumped into the air and screamed with joy. She jumped onto Shiken’s back, his face turned red and his hear began to pound faster again. He closed his eyes in embarrassment and clenched his fists. Could it get any more embarrassing? Then she fell asleep. Shiken Kan twitched a few times before walking over to the old man at the door, who took her on his shoulders and thanks Shiken before walking off. Could she have found a worse place to sleep? The answer? Yes. The tall scientist in his lab coat smiled as he finished his popcorn and threw the empty case into the garbage. Then he brought himself to a sitting position in full realization.
“Who uploaded the muscles onto Shiken Kan?

Word Count: 585

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4 Weights for -20 words.
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Name: Shiken Kan
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Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Dec 15, 2007 10:45 am

“It was me.” A person announced from a bright computer across the room. “Come here.” The scientist said. “I’m… I’m sorry,” the person muttered as he approached, carrying his laptop under his arm. “You best be, upgrading my son with all of those things without even asking me.” He stands up and the smaller boy, only a teenager, stopped in front of him. “He… he’s not your son. He’s just a machine.” He stammered. “No, he is much more; he is a figure of a boy. Do you not respect that?” The doctor towered over this boy, and unlike to Shiken, he is not in the most of polite of moods, considering just the other day that he had fired the entire staff because they wouldn’t help him when he was drowning, that felt like so long ago.

The small boy trembled, struggling to get his message out… Of his pocket. He drew it form his pocket; it was a many folded crumpled piece of paper. He transmitted the message.
“I am Azure, I know what it means, I am aware. I am extremely intelligent, without bragging, and I surpassed my teacher’s knowledge and speed when it came to complicated machines.” The doctor cut him off rudely, “you think Shiken Kan is a complicated mess?” The young boy sighed and ignored the comment. Continuing, “My family died a long time ago, when I was young, typical ninja story, only instead of becoming a ninja I became a machinist. I love working with machines, and… I’ve never really had a younger brother.” He looked up with sparkling eyes at the lead scientist. Who had begun to cry slightly at that last line? He extended his arms, recognizing his usefulness he hugged the boy. “Welcome, son.” The boy had begun to cry.

Shiken Kan walked out of the small house and into the closed off reserve/street. Many beggars sat there, some where sleeping, others where talking, some where having open baths, others where being kept company by some workers, probably volunteers, and some where eating. They all seemed happy though, like they new someone was watching for them, even though they where less fortunate then their peers, they had found new ones just like them. Shiken smiled proudly of himself, for no particular reason, and then his stomach growled. He didn’t want to take any beggar food, he wasn’t one. He decided to go to the science lab, his home. Then a voice cracked over inside of his head. “Guess what, son; I want you to meet your older brother!” The voice shut off before Shiken could jump with joy and go to the door, an aggressive looking beggar sat there. As far as Shiken knew, this was the only exit.

“Can I leave?” Shiken asked, his voice almost cracked he hadn’t spoken for so long. “No, your one of us, I am not going to let you leave.” Shiken backed away, shocked, he put his hand over his chest and he felt hurt. He backed out of the small building and looked towards all the other ones, they wouldn’t lead to his freedom. Then he saw a tower, that will. He ran to it then stopped and starred right at it. How would he get up, he couldn’t jump that! He tried anyway. “Kid, they don’t want us beggin’ on the street, so they keep us in here, that’s why they won’t let you go.” Shiken understood and turned away. “Thank you.” The person raised his hand in a “don’t mention it” maneuver.

The two scientists where mad at work, last time the doctors adrenaline was pumping because Shiken Kan was drowning. This time, however, they had nothing to lose for not being on time. So they let Shiken scratch at the wall for a bit while they made it, it was allot easier then water walking. And the boy worked fast, and it was very impressive. Shiken tried jumping over the tower, unsuccessfully, he tried running up it, didn’t work, and all sorts of random things that wouldn’t involve damaging the tower. He once almost punched it from frustration. Then his eyes flashed again with the hand signs, the way to do it, and how it can be used in battle, the two scientists worked quickly. He formed the single hand seal and ran up the length of the tower before performing a flip and landing on the top. He looked over the entire city of Sunagakure. What a site, but he didn’t have time to admire the sites, he jumped from his perch and slid down the wall until he was on the ground. Then he made a mad run for the science lab.

Learn tree climbing, D rank jutsu, 400 words, 40 Jutsu points.
-40 Jutsu points.
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Sankay


Female
Number of posts : 1133
Age : 31
Registration date : 2006-11-24

Ninja Scroll
Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyThu Dec 20, 2007 5:28 pm

strenght edited
jutsu training accepted
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Dec 29, 2007 8:31 pm

Excitement overcame all emotions, his heart pounded quicker as he sped towards his destination. The doctor had just told him he had an older brother, he was so excited. What was he like, did he look like him? Is he nice, is he mean? Is he as smart as dad? What about his age? How old is he? Shiken ran with a huge grin across his face. But he began feeling guilty for Tsuuji; he had left her in the camp. How did she get out? If she had broken out, why was she so eager to get back? Maybe she wasn’t, she just felt like doing the right thing and going back. But why? She had used Shiken for her own purpose to get the older boy away from her. She had a plan, Shiken Kan knew it. He shook his head and twisted his thoughts. He didn’t need to think about that right now, he was going home to see his father again, it had only been a day, and it felt like such an adventure.

Shiken arrived at the large metal doors to his house, which turned out to be the science lab, he pushed the massive door open slightly, it was lighter then last time, but the way the pulley system worked a feeble old man would be able to move the door if he tried. But they could turn off the system, or even reverse the effect to make the door nearly impossible to lift. He ran in when the door was open slightly, it closed gently behind him, they kept it well oiled. He entered the building and all seemed different. After being outside this all seemed so… dark. He entered shirtless.

Azure looked at him with a raised brow; he didn’t know what Shiken looked like. The doctor looked at him with an open mouth. “I leave you for a few hours and you come back half naked and not wearing your cloak?” Shiken looked down slightly guilty, he had forgotten to get his clothing back, he was still wearing the beggar pants that where given to him. “Don’t worry about it.” Shiken looked up, happy; he ran forward and hugged the leader. “There there…” He said. “Welcome home.” Azure said. The leader had almost forgotten, he laughed slightly and let Shiken go. “This is your brother, Azure.” Shiken looked up at the 16-year-old. He came forward slightly shy. The two looked at each other for a bit, and then Shiken hugged Azure who followed. He never realized how much Shiken acted like a human. The two boys let go of each other and Shiken smiled. The doctor raised his chin and put on of his fingers on his forehead. “Well, it seemed longer in my head.”

Azure laughed, Shiken looked at him questionably. The doctor snickered afterwards and came up with an idea. “Lets all go out and play soccer.” Shiken tilted his head to the side, oblivious. Azure smiled and took Shiken’s shoulder. The three began going to the playground, Azure took the time to carefully explain every little detail of the sport to Shiken Kan. From not using your hands to bending the ball, which he didn’t need to know. But Azure went ahead and ranted about the math involved. Shiken zoned out when he began talking about physics, weight, falling, and spinning, you know the stuff of 12th graders.

Word Count: 570
Train 19 Ninjutsu
-20 Words because of Weights
(50-20=30)
(30x19=570)
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Sankay


Female
Number of posts : 1133
Age : 31
Registration date : 2006-11-24

Ninja Scroll
Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Jan 05, 2008 9:53 pm

edited
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySat Feb 07, 2009 9:42 pm

"I don't want to wear a lab coat." Shiken Kan said, he pulled at the sleeves and bit at the collar of the lab coat. Azure pouted, then took a kunai from the table and quickly cut the sleeves off, as well as the bottom half, so Shiken’s hobo pants were showing. “I don’t think you look better, but you’ll be more comfortable.” Shiken shrugged and gave his own slight pout. Azure placed the kunai back onto the table. Shiken looked at the weapon for a while. “When you were talking about… weight, and physics…” Azure looked up and smiled. “You’re interested now?” Shiken looked at him; sensors prompted a sigh, which he released. “Not yet, but I want to learn… that.” Shiken pointed at the kunai. Azure looked at it, and regretted it; he decided it was a bad idea to use a weapon to cut the clothing that could spark Shiken’s ‘Curiosity Mode.’ Azure sighed; Shiken would proceed to question him until he told him everything he wanted to know. “That’s a kunai, it’s a projectile weapon used for fighting at long rang, among other things.” Shiken tilted his head, the words Azure spoke being copied and stored in his super computer mind. Azure looked at him; Shiken’s eyes still had the small barely noticeable green light emitting diode; the small light would be invisible to anyone who didn’t install it there. Azure titled his head back as he remembered building the compact super computer that would go into Shiken’s head. He remembered the problems The Doctor had with constructing Shiken; they had to build a small computer that would fit inside a skull. He didn’t even know the names of people like Azure, machinists, it’s unlikely The Doctor cared at all about social life, as long as Shiken wasn’t alive and walking.

Word Count: 305
-20 Words by 4 weights
+10 Taijutsu
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Sankay


Female
Number of posts : 1133
Age : 31
Registration date : 2006-11-24

Ninja Scroll
Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySun Feb 08, 2009 1:49 pm

ok what bloodline do you want?
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptySun Feb 08, 2009 2:16 pm

I want the Nara Bloodline. Also, I was thinking we could do a double bloodline thing. Not exactly sure how it would work out since we are both from different villages, but we could each play an NPC and our actual character and add words up like that.

Hmm?
I'll ask an admin if we can do that...

Okay, he said yes.
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyTue Feb 10, 2009 8:28 pm

Shiken Kan lifted his hands, he lowered them again and sat their. In was in his computer reboot mode, so, to the normal human, he appeared to be in a sort of reverry. His fingers twitched as he faught to gain control of himself again. His mind clicked, and he regained control, the fighitng was for nothing. He stood up and looked around. He sighed then looked at his hand, inside of it there was a kunai. He grasped the weapon tightly and then placed it inside of his pocket.

[that was me starting the bloodline training, Sankay, if we do like I think you accepted, you can post Sankay's point of view in here, and then I will post mine, and so on for 20 posts, then we will each get our bloodline. I thought of the idea, what it is is you can control the NPCs, just like a normal training, and the idea is for me to write more words then you. [and you have to write a few less then me. [cause I'm sooo awsome]
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

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PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyMon Feb 16, 2009 11:36 am

[alright, the admin, who happens to be my other character, has allowed that ANYONE join this training, wether your here or not, to help me get my bloodline, I don't want to cheat and get it, I want to get it just like any body else, so anyone can join as an NPC, and if they are level 20, they will also get their bloodline, or 10 stats of your choice.
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Sankay


Female
Number of posts : 1133
Age : 31
Registration date : 2006-11-24

Ninja Scroll
Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyMon Feb 16, 2009 2:03 pm

"What are you doing?" I ask as I see shiken kan lifting and lowering his hands. "I was just training and I thought I would stop by, Wanna train together?" I ask as he puts away his kunai.

[So if I just "train" with you or something for 20 posts then we will both get out bloodline? If so I will pm you the bloodline I want. Also that is a very good idea.....I'm awesomer than you...]
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyWed Feb 18, 2009 2:50 pm

Shiken looked up at you he winced. "I don't not even know who you are, why would I traing with you?" He studied the person in front of him for a few seconds, his programs began running, his mind calulculating.

[okay, Sankay, heres the challenge, you have to post the same amount or more words then me, then I post more 10 more then my previous post, then you post the same amount, then I post 10 more then my previous post until we filled 20 posts.

[41 Words]
[2/20 done.]
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Sankay


Female
Number of posts : 1133
Age : 31
Registration date : 2006-11-24

Ninja Scroll
Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyFri Feb 20, 2009 12:37 am

"Ohh sorry," We havn't officially met, my name is sankay and I'm from the leaf village." I put my hand out to shake.
"you might be wondering why I'm out here, well, I took a very long jog, so, do you want to train or what? I came all this way?"

(51 words)
(3/20)
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Shiken Kan


Number of posts : 65
Registration date : 2007-09-26

Ninja Scroll
Name: Shiken Kan
Village: Hidden Sand
Level: 40

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyFri Feb 20, 2009 1:06 am

[if your going to be counting that way...]

Shiken Kan didn't smile, well, he kinda did, but only slightly. "My name is Shiken Kan." Then he was taken aback. "You jogged here from the leaf village?" He shook his head and looked back at Sankay "Why on earth would you do that? That sounds like a ridiculour idea!"

[51 words exactly]
[4/40 posts done]
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Sankay


Female
Number of posts : 1133
Age : 31
Registration date : 2006-11-24

Ninja Scroll
Name: Sankay Kawairashii
Village: Hidden Leaf
Level: 54

Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child Empty
PostSubject: Re: Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child   Shiken Kan ~ Test Tube Child EmptyFri Feb 20, 2009 1:16 am

"Well..."I say with a grin..."I came here because I wanted to get to know the other villages, so now that i'm here, wanna train?" I say with one eye brow raised. And besides, I jog every day, "I just felt like going somewhere with all my jogging then I say you and felt like training.""sooo, are you coming or not?"

(i dunno)
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