training ninjutsu weak to ok

Sankay was in her bed, she was laying there and she felt the urge that she wanted to train her ninjutsu, she wanted to so badly but just couldn’t either find the time or she just didn’t want to. the night before she was in her bed, and while she was sleeping in her bed, which was not to comfortable, she fell on to the hard ground, she got a bruise on her head, after that she didn’t want to get up or anything like that so she just laid in her bed and slept all say. But she knew she had to do something the next day so she decided to train her ninjutsu. She didn’t want to get up but she knew she had to. She tried and tried but couldn’t. It was like some weird force was pushing her into her bed. she tried to roll off her bed and managed to get off, but she hurt her head again, right in the bruise so it felt like, I could never describe but I’m sure everyone knows the pain that you get when you hit a bruise when its only a day old, when I say “a day old” I mean it has only bean there for a day. Anyways, she got out of her bed and headed towards the fridge. She took out some food that has bean there for a bit. When she took a bight, she almost barfed it was that bad. So she just plugged her nose and ate it, she then left her house to the training place and then she did whatever people do to get their ninjutsu up. She trained until it was dark, once it was dark she went back to her house and jumped in her bed, she didn’t want to eat that crap again. She then closed her eyes and fell asleep.the next morning she woke up and got her self ready for another day of hard training. She ate her food, stretched her body in many different ways and grabbed a glass of water before leaving to go train her Ninjutsu yet again. She started walking to the training ground which seamed quiet far. When she got there, she started to train her Ninjutsu. When she was done this training, she started to go home, panting from the hard work. When she got back she ate some food and got into her bed, which she had been out of for one full hour. She then closed her eyes and imagined what it would be like to win the chunin exams, and fell asleep.



(Done training)

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ok i finished.

Word Count:437 you can raise it from feeble to weak