Kimmimaro's Training

Kimmimaro walks into the leaf village and sits on a bench waiting for Ziorashi to come. " I wonder who this guy even is. How do I know he won't try to kill me, he might be from the Mist for all I know."


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Ziorashi walked over solemnly, he stopped in front of Kimmimaro, 10 meters away from him. "So, you decided you wanted to become more adult, stronger." He said. He is wearing shades, as last time you saw him, but now he is wearing two swords on his back, forming an x across the back. He is also wearing a red sash going across his chest. And baggy black pants, but tight around the waist and heels. So movement was not impaired.

[Right much longer posts, and don't forget to mark your word count. And for future training, remember to post here and not make a new topic]

"Yeah," Kimmiamro said suspiciously. " I'm ready to train just let us get it over with I want to become a chuunin." Kimmiamro stands up and walks up to Ziorashi, and stares right in the eyes, not even 3 feet away from him. "So, are you ready to train me? Or are you going to give me away to the Mist village to kill me?" Kimmiamro is still suspicious if Ziorashi is a Mist villager.

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Ziorashi was confused, slightly, as to kimmimaro's suspicion. "If I were to drag you off to the mist village, I would have done that already, also, you wouldn't have been a threat." Ziorashi stepped a few feet back, "this is what I will teach you to be, a threat, a killer." Ziorashi lifted his fists in front of him. "Raise your weapons, we fight."

Kimmimaro suddenly has an angry look on his face. Kimmimaro raises his fists and agrees, "Ok, then let's fight." Kimmimaro also brings out a kunai, seeming ready for anything, except to die. "I'm ready."

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[write longer posts, as if your training, 50 to 200 or something. Take your time, it's okay. And stack up your words, so 59 +34 = 93.]

Ziorashi stands still as a statue for a few moments, then slowly approched Kimmimaro, his main intention was to rip the kunai from his hands and dispatch of it. His eyes are aimed directly on the kunai, his chest was even turned in direction of where Kimmimaro was holding the kunai.

Kimmimaro sees Ziorashi is looking in the direction of the kunai as well as his body being turned. Kimmimaro steps back with his eyes on Ziorashi's body, looking for any movement, looking ready, and not at the same time. Kimmimaro shakes as well as stands still. I whisper to myself, " I don't know what to expect, but i'll give it my all. I just want to become a chuunin, I can't believe I made it to be a Gennin because OH STAY ON SUBJECT Kimmimaro! All I know is that this guy should be really good, i'm thinking he is a Jouunin. I'd better be careful" I say to myself as I start to speak louder. "ok, let's get going." Kimimaro jumps forward about 5 feet away from Zirashi in a flash and whips his kunai to his stomach and presses it up against his skin, not peircing it though. Waiting for him to fight back. After he preses his Kunai he jumps up and takes away his kunai, while in the air he throws the kunai to the ground trying to hit Ziorashi, not thinking it will hit him. He lands about the same distance he started, about 10-15ft. in front of Ziorashi.

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Ziorashi doesn't move when Kimmimaro approches him, and neither when Kimmimaro throws the kunai down at him, intentinally missing him. Kimmimaro eventually lands back on the ground and jumps away again.
Ziorashi sighes, "for the first while..." Ziorashi sits down, "people, and ninjas, sometimes even beasts, don't allways do what has to be done in a time of battle." He picked up a leaf that had fallen beside him in the commotion caused by Kimmimaro's jump, and held it in his palm. "Unfortunetly..." He crushed the leaf in his fist, "Ninjas don't have the luxery... of hesitation." His voice increased in aggresivity when he said hesitation, the ferocity reaching it's climax. Then he went silent, his eyes opening wider so that they no longer glare. He opened his hand, the leaf in his hand was unharmed. "Kimmimaro, sit down, lets talk, knowledge is half the battle."
Ziorashi looked up at Kimmimaro, reaching his right arm forward, palm open, the leaf blew away in the breeze, floating slowly around the general vicinity of them both, not really leaving eyesight. Then eventually settling down on the ground beside Ziorashi.

[Good job Kimmimaro, keep it up, if you run out of content, don't forget descriptions, good job.]

Kimimaro walks over and sits next to Ziorashi, " Alright. So what are you going to teach me first about this 'knowledge' you speak of" Kimmimaro sits with a hunch back against a bench in the Leaf Village. " I just want to become strong so I can become the hokage someday." (lol, copied naruto) "I will win the chuunin exams."


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"I once wanted to become Hokage, once, when I was younger." He flicked his wrist in Kimmimaro's direction, "sit straight boy, you'll hurt your back when you get older." Ziorashi thougth about that for a moment, ninjas had a low lif expectancy, not many lived past the age of 30, and few past 40. Most ninjas age quickly, being wise before their time.

"Kimmimaro, if you where suprised by a ninja that was stronger then you, and faster then you, how would you defend yourself?"

Kimmimaro starts to sit up straight, then he starts to think. "Ah! I know exactly what I would do... Since he is stronger, he probably has more weight, I'm not saying he is fat just, has more muscle weight, am I right? Then, since he is faster then me, I would somehow use his own weight against him, then trap him until other ninja's come to take him away."

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Ziorashi made a wise sounding groan, then spoke. "More strength doen't mean he's slower, because he's faster doesn't mean he's weaker, and whats to say someone will come to your aid, even though ninjas work in teams, doesn't mean you can always rely on your team members." Ziorashi nodded at his wisdom. "You need to know how to defend yourself and make enough time for you to run from enemies that are stronger then you."

Kimmimaro knodded, "Ok, so exactly how do I do that?" Kimmimaro waited for his answer anxiously.

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Ziorashi thought back, he remembered a few bit about how he had to fight without sight for a long time, his sense of hearing seemed to be amplifyed by that. "Fight, don't do anything risky, fight for function, not style." Ziorashi stood slowly, grabbing his sword off his back, and tossing the second sword he carried to kimmimaro, "I don't care if you want to use a sword or not, but for now, you will use it." Ziorashi didn't take the sword from the case, so that it remained blunt and wouldn't cut.

Kimmimaro catches the sword ready to train. "Alright, let's go" Kimmimaro stands in a stance with one leg straight forward and one bent behind him. (like neji at the beginning of 64 palms.) Then Kimmiamro takes out the sword and sets the case on the floor next to him. "Ok, now, let's go and get it done, just kil me, i know you will anway, not unless you don't even try." Kimmimaro smirks.

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Ziorashi looks away for a second, he stands perfectly straight, no fighting position, and grabs the sheath with one hand. Drawing his blade, he gently tosses the sheath to the side. He points the sword at the ground, between Kimmimaro and his feet, at an angle. Then waits. "Feeling cocky, boy? Make your move."